中文挑战

Alright, finally have time to get to this.

雨一直下

falling the rain keeps -> the rain keeps falling

气氛不算融洽

less the harmonious mood than is -> the mood is less than harmonious

在同个屋檐下

the same under roof living -> living under the same roof

你渐渐感到心在变化

feel slowly your you heart changing -> you slowly feel your heart changing

你爱着他

love him you -> you love him

也许也带着恨吧

maybe and hate also him -> and maybe also hate him

青春耗了一大半

much so of you've your wasted youth -> you've wasted so much of your youth

原来只是陪他玩耍

was it playmate to his just along all be -> all along it was just to be his playmate

正想离开他

him thinking leaving you're just about when -> just when you're thinking about leaving him

他却拿着鲜花

flowers somehow shows with he up -> he somehow shows up with flowers

说不着边的话

words pointless spouting -> spouting pointless words

让整个场面更加尴尬

scene the awkward even making more -> making the scene even more awkward

不可思议吗

right unbelievable, -> unbelievable, right

梦在瞬间崩塌

dreams instant, your in that crumbled -> in that instant, your dreams crumbled

为何当初那么傻

stupid why so the outset? at were you -> why were you so stupid at the outset?

还一心想要嫁给他

so to marry determined him? and -> and so determined to marry him?

就是爱到深处才怨他

loved resent because deeply you so you him -> you resent him because you love him so deeply

舍不舍得都断了吧

should leave even bear can't you if you it, -> even if you can't bear it, you should leave

那是从来都没有后路的悬崖

you're facing with escape a way of precipice no -> you're facing a precipice with no way of escape

就是爱到深处才由他

you deeply so with put his ways you because loved up -> you put up with his ways because you loved so deeply

碎了心也要放得下

yet let brokenhearted, go you to have -> brokenhearted, yet you have to let go

难道忘了那爱他的伤已密密麻麻

you forgotten from innumerable received you wounds have the loving him? -> have you forgotten the innumerable

wounds you received loving him?

不要再为了他挣扎

no you him for should fight more -> No more should you fight for him

不要再为他左牵右挂

more should no with concern you affairs his yourself -> No more should you concern yourself with his affairs

今后不管他爱不爱谁

today, does he or love who starting worry doesn't about don't -> starting today, don't worry about who he does or

doesn't love

快乐吗，都随他

or if who happy not cares he's -> who cares if he's happy or not

@jkhsu: It's basically right, although you have a few typos.

On these lines:

you resent him because you love him so deeply

have you forgotten the innumerable wounds you received loving him?