what's the best dialect to learn after mandarin?

[Quest]

mun, did you write--

in canto 拼音:

但係呢，如果人要写中文，咁佢哋喺香港，佢哋可能要用traditional中文啊。

??

took me a while to figure out what you wrote!!

but still, it's fragmented and not in correct grammar, maybe I interpreted it wrong.

[mun]

i think it should be

in canto 拼 音:

但係呢, 如果人要寫 中文, 甘 巨 地 起(在) 香港, 巨 地可能要用traditional 中文 呀.

yea.. its bad cantonese.. since i don't know where to look for canto help. bad canto since i am australian born chinese.