help translation

[Quest]

My friend asked me to translate:

May God help us find a cure (for cancer).

into Chinese.

I gave him:

望上帝指引我们寻找出癌病的治疗方法。

Can you offer a more compact version?

[sm_sung]

This may sound a little odd but what about:

望上帝帮我们找法疗癌症。

[smithsgj]

望上帝指引我们治疗癌症。

[skylee]

願神指引

治癌妙方/法

[Quest]

hmm maybe

愿神指引治癌之法

thanks all

[galitonwu]

但愿上帝能帮助我们治愈癌症。

you 'd better give me the context , then I can understand the meaning of the article.

[Quest]

there is no context, god, cancer and cure are the context.

and I don't think you can go more compact than 愿神指引治癌之法.

[galitonwu]

愿神指引治癌之法.

这是在古文中的用法，现在已经没有人这么说了，包括在现代文学中都不会这么用的。

[Quest]

I know I am Chinese myself. God is pretty 古 himself j/k

[pazu]

and I don't think you can go more compact than 愿神指引治癌之法.

願神示治癌法

this is more compact... but may not be as good as the previous translation...

[Quest]

神示癌方?

[zackzhou]

愿神指引治癌之法 is commonly used in modern Chinese. it dose make sense, at least to me.

[galitonwu]

reason?

[skylee]

Quest, why don't you like "妙"? I think it is very "妙".

[Quest]

妙 sounds a little less sincere to me, I don't know why, I don't think it works well in this prayer.

[pazu]

其實最簡單的翻譯是 「十」..........

反正基督徒乜都話呢個,

下兩天,,,,,,,,,十..........

晴天......... 十,,,,,,,,,,,

意外,,,,,,, + ......................

結婚.......... +