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Would you be willing to correct this email? Thank you!

商业调查

您好:

我在一家新闻公司做工。我们设在美国的公司是XYZ国际新闻。我们在调研是否画家艺术家为在中国新闻来源旁边推广付出。

这个电子邮件地址是最好的发给您们一些简短的问题吗?

随意看看我们的网址.

www.XXXXX.com

用户名: XXXXX

密码: XXXXX

谢谢您们

顺颂商祺

江平白敬上

I would like it to say:

Business inquiry

Hello,

I work for a news company. Our American-based company is XYZ International News. We are conducting research into whether artists and musicians would pay for being promoted alongside news sources from China.

Is this the best email address to send you a few brief questions?

Feel free to look at our website:

www.XXXXX.com

Username: XXXXX

Password: XXXXX

Thank you

Wishing your business well

Jiang Pingbai

Edited by shivasprogeny
Posted

I work in media relations. Just a contents question: Would it not be appropriate to point out at this stage what is in it for them, it try to sell your research? Plus ask them if they would be prepared to cooperate rather than just assume they would.

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