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hello

anyone can tell me if this is understandable? for a chinese adult

it is for a web design advertisement

- 有自己网页的 .com

- 翻译到西班牙语和英语

- 我们介绍您电子商务

thanks in advance

Posted

first and second one can be understand, but not the 3rd one.

do you mean “我们向您介绍电子商务” at the 3rd sentence?

Posted

your sentence is better than mine

my idea for the 3° sentence is: "Have your own e-commerce"

but i didn't want it to be like the first sentence

any idea?

Posted

understandable but weird (wrong grammar?)

- 拥有自己的.com网站

- 拥有西班牙语和英语多语言版本

- 拥有自己的电子商务平台

Repeat words is good in Chinese. It is called "排比"

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