Could I ask someone to check over Chinese in Xmas card?

[paperstars]

Hi all!

Just a bit of background info on me: I am moderately fluent in speaking Chinese since I speak it at home, however, my writing is mainly self-taught.

I've decided to try my hand at writing a Christmas card to my close friend in Chinese. I won't be seeing him today, so I will be giving him the card tomorrow. I have what I want to say written out and I want to make sure the grammar and message is understandable. It doesn't have to corrected to be perfect Chinese. Therefore, I was wondering if I could email/PM my message to someone and have him/her check it over?

The reason why I don't want to post it here is that it is a bit personal.

Thank you in advance!

[semantic nuance]

Hi,

If it is not too late for your xmas card, pm me, and I'd like to help. I wanted to pm you in the first place, but found out that you couldn't be pmed.

[semantic nuance]

Hey papaerstars,

I already sent an email to your mailbox via the administrator. You may check it. It's quite unconvenient that you don't use PM. Anyway, if you have further questions, ask here or send me an email that I can answer you directly.

Hope it helps!

Edited December 26, 2009 at 04:11 PM by semantic nuance

[paperstars]

Hi,

Thank you for your reply, I answered your email! I think my PM box isn't activated right now because I'm still a new member. =)

Merry Christmas to you! 聖誕快樂!