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:help

i don't know where to start .... :conf

i want to start something, without using the word LOVE in the first 20 words... but that's hard....

thanks,

PK_frappa

Posted

When the cherry blossoms appear

After the darkness of winter

I see your face smiling.

As the crane looks out pensively

From his silent perch

He reflects your eyes.

What more joy could arise

In my heart than

Giving you all of those precious things?

My love shines

My love shines

Througout the world

My love shines

My love shines

Because of you.

Posted

"PK"?? :lol:

A love song without "love", you mean something like this?

錫曬你

曲:許冠傑 | 詞:許冠傑/黎彼得

錫曬你 你乖乖地 我實行錫曬你

倆家都拖到實隻手指尾

上去天棚放飛機

#錫曬你 駛乜講我直頭錫曬你

我係屋企帶定個影相機 替你攞景瞓係地

照顧你 因住冷親 即刻冚多張被

買野「質」俾你食 郁啲慌死你餓過饑

一於錫曬你 你乖乖地 我實行錫曬你

你想搬乜我做你好「咕喱」

冷氣機都托得起

@錫曬你 駛乜講我直頭錫曬你

我洗衫洗褲又會整幾味 跟啲飛仔冇得比

Repeat #

一於錫曬你 你乖乖地 我實行錫曬你

你想出街我做你好司機 送嘢疏爽冇慳皮

Repeat @

錫曬你 一於錫曬你

Posted

Or something like this -

分手總要在雨天 張學友

晨曦細雨 重臨在這大地 人孤孤單單躲避

轉身剎那 在這熟悉的路旁 察覺身後路人是你

如一套戲 重逢在這舊地 而彼此不知怎預備

一些嘆氣 跟一串慰問 和隨便說一些讚美

為何你眼光 年月未變 思憶怎麼要再返舊年

你說要走的一晚 綿綿夜雨 也似這天

總要在雨天 逃避某段從前 但雨點偏偏促使這樣遇見

總要在雨天 人便掛念從前 在痛哭擁抱告別後從沒再見

而一個我 言詞漸覺乏味 人不知怎麼躲避

終於看見 在這熟識的路旁 那個他靜靜凝望你

而一個你 重離別這舊地 臨走的一刻親近地

輕輕送我 多真摯慰問 尤如逝去當天語氣

為何你眼光 年月未變 思憶怎麼要再返舊年

你說要走的一晚 綿綿夜雨 也似這天

總要在雨天 逃避某段從前 但雨點偏偏促使這樣遇見

總要在雨天 人便掛念從前 在痛哭擁抱告別後從沒再見

Posted

thanks. this is a good start... i wish i had 張學友's voice, it would make it easier ... i'll see what i can do...

if u have more ideas, please post more ...m'goi!! :D

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