Yezze Posted March 26, 2010 at 07:50 PM Report Posted March 26, 2010 at 07:50 PM Anyone want to check these for me, i know there are going to be mistakes. Also, if something doesn't make sense, please let me know (and if you wouldn't mind, tell me how to fix it, so i don't make that mistake again). Topic: Travel, not a story just sentences. 虽然我住在美国的但是想去中国。我越来越想去中国旅行了。我妈妈不放心我自己一个人。我听说中国是个好地方。我想和朋友一起去旅行。我想去旅行不过我几两个星期。我喜欢各种各样列过。 我想去中国见(?)的朋友。- This might not make sense sui ran wo zhu zai mei guo dan shi wo xiang qu zhong guo. Wo yue lai yue xiang qu zhong guo lv xing le. Wo ma ma bu fang xin wo zi ji yi ge ren lv. Wo ting shuo zhong guo shi ge hao di fang. Wo xiang le peng you yi qi qu lv xing. Wo xiang qu lvxing bu guo wo ji liang ge xing qi. Wo xihuan ge zhong ge yang lie guo. Wo xiang qu zhong guo jian (? i think something goes here, but i don't know what) de peng you ---- In addition to this, i have to use the 2 of the following (in a sentence that deals with traveling) 进去/来 jìn qù / lái 出去/来chū qu / lái 上去/来shànɡ qù / lái This part gets me, i know that those mean to go in/out, come in/out, go up/down... but how do i incorporate them into a sentence about traveling. Any ideas/examples This a homework assignment for my online Chinese class, but as i also hope you can tell, i am not just asking "do it for me", but a double check and an explanation for 1 part. Thanks! Quote
skylee Posted March 26, 2010 at 10:53 PM Report Posted March 26, 2010 at 10:53 PM Consider chaning 我妈妈不放心我自己一个人 to 我妈妈不放心我自己一个人去. I don't know what 我几两个星期 means. Do you mean you have two weeks only? If so, it is 我只有两个星期. 我喜欢各种各样列过 does not make sense at all. What is it that you like? I think you know the sentences are not coherent. 我想去中国见(?)的朋友 makes sense if what you mean is you want to go to China to see your or Peter's or Paul's or Mary's friend(s). 进去/来 jìn qù / lái 出去/来chū qu / lái 上去/来shànɡ qù / lái If you are looking for examples for 进去/进来, 出去/出来 and 上去/上来, you could try pasting each word to an online dictionary like this website -> http://www.nciku.cn/ Quote
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