Scoobyqueen Posted June 28, 2010 at 11:02 AM Report Posted June 28, 2010 at 11:02 AM In the following sentence, how would you translate: 千挑万选 是企业在激烈竞争中立于不败之地的关键因素,同时也是企业经过千挑万选的 Cheers in advance. Quote
skylee Posted June 28, 2010 at 11:12 AM Report Posted June 28, 2010 at 11:12 AM It is 是+企業+經過+千挑萬選+的. Quote
Kenny同志 Posted June 28, 2010 at 11:13 AM Report Posted June 28, 2010 at 11:13 AM In the following sentence, how would you translate: 过千挑万选 是企业在激烈竞争中立于不败之地的关键因素,同时也是企业经过千挑万选的 Cheers in advance. It should be 经千挑万选 or 经过千挑万选. The second Chinese line is incomplete. And the missing part needs to be supplemented before the whole sentence can be fully understood and then translated. Quote
skylee Posted June 28, 2010 at 11:22 AM Report Posted June 28, 2010 at 11:22 AM 千挑萬選 = 精挑細選 = http://www.google.com.hk/dictionary?langpair=en%7Czh-TW&q=%E7%B2%BE%E6%8C%91%E7%B4%B0%E9%81%B8&hl=zh-TW&aq=f 1 Quote
Scoobyqueen Posted June 28, 2010 at 11:32 AM Author Report Posted June 28, 2010 at 11:32 AM Cheers for the responses. If it is any help here is the complete sentence: 英才网联人力资源专家认为,核心员工是企业的命脉,是企业在激烈竞争中立于不败之地的关键因素,同时也是企业经过千挑万选的. I would still appreciate an approximate translation of the 千挑万选. Quote
roddy Posted June 28, 2010 at 11:33 AM Report Posted June 28, 2010 at 11:33 AM rigorous / lengthy / extensive selection process, or something along those lines? Hmmm, maybe not. 2 Quote
Kenny同志 Posted June 28, 2010 at 12:02 PM Report Posted June 28, 2010 at 12:02 PM Cheers for the responses. If it is any help here is the complete sentence: 英才网联人力资源专家认为,核心员工是企业的命脉,是企业在激烈竞争中立于不败之地的关键因素,同时也是企业经过千挑万选的. I would still appreciate an approximate translation of the 千挑万选. According to HRM experts from Yingcai Net, core employees, who usually have undergone a carefully planned selection process, are the lifeblood of a company and a crucial factor which decides the existence of the company in fierce competition. By the way, the original can be bettered as follows, 英才网联人力资源专家认为,核心员工经企业千挑万选,是企业在激烈竞争中立于不败之地的关键因素,是企业的命脉。 3 Quote
Scoobyqueen Posted June 28, 2010 at 12:25 PM Author Report Posted June 28, 2010 at 12:25 PM According to HRM experts from Yingcai Net, core employees, who usually have undergone a carefully planned selection process, are the lifebhood of a company and a crucial factor which decides the existence of the company in fierce competition. By the way, the original can be bettered as follows, 英才网联人力资源专家认为,核心员工经企业千挑万选,是企业在激烈竞争中立于不败之地的关键因素,是企业的命脉。 Thanks Kenny, this is not the first time you have delivered a high-quality translation. I really appreciate this. Quote
Kenny同志 Posted June 28, 2010 at 12:34 PM Report Posted June 28, 2010 at 12:34 PM Thanks Kenny, this is not the first time you have delivered a high-quality translation. I really appreciate this. No prob. Quote
buanryoh Posted June 28, 2010 at 10:27 PM Report Posted June 28, 2010 at 10:27 PM According to HRM experts from Yingcai Net, core employees, who usually have undergone a carefully planned selection process, are the lifeblood of a company and a crucial factor which decides the existence of the company in fierce competition. By the way, the original can be bettered as follows, 英才网联人力资源专家认为,核心员工经企业千挑万选,是企业在激烈竞争中立于不败之地的关键因素,是企业的命脉。 Excellent job from Kenny; however, "carefully planned selection process" doesn't sound quite right to me. I don't believe a native speaker would use "carefully planned" to modify "selection process" as carefully planned stresses the preparation behind an event or tour, etc. A selection process (to me) is something that has multiple rounds with each round possibly increasing in difficulty. How about "rigorous" to express the meaning of considerable effort from the company and the difficulty of the selection process for employees? perhaps "...have undergone a rigorous selection process" would convey the Chinese meaning better and appear more natural in English? Quote
Kenny同志 Posted June 29, 2010 at 01:23 AM Report Posted June 29, 2010 at 01:23 AM According to HRM experts from Yingcai Net, core employees, who have usually undergone a rigorous selection process, are a crucial factor deciding a company's existence in fierce competition; they are the lifeblood of the company. I have edited my translation upon your insightful comment. Thanks. Quote
roddy Posted June 29, 2010 at 02:07 AM Report Posted June 29, 2010 at 02:07 AM Far too many words still, surely. Edit edit edit. Be merciless. Quote
Kenny同志 Posted June 29, 2010 at 02:12 AM Report Posted June 29, 2010 at 02:12 AM Far too many words still, surely. Edit edit edit. Be merciless. My English is far from good. 还请Roddy多多指教。 Quote
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