student classical composition in public exam 2010

[Zomac]

This amazing composition has hit many forums in these days. The author showed off his talent in classical chinese within a short examination session. The composition was marked as "suspicious work" and submitted to an expert's team to evaluate its authenticity. See if you can read it...

2010江蘇高考題目：

綠色,生機勃勃,賞心悅目。綠色,與生命、生態緊密相連。今天,綠色成為嶄新的理念,與每個人的生活息息相關。

請以「綠色生活」為題寫一篇不少於800字的文章。要求:①角度自選;②立意自定;③除詩歌外,文體自選。

Interview with the author: Wang Yun-Fei (from Jiangsu)

http://finance.ifeng.com/money/roll/20100711/2395028.shtml

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綠色生活

呱呱小兒，但飲牛湩，至於弱冠，不明犍狀。佌佌之豚，日食其羓。洎其成立，未識豜豭。每齧毚臑，然竟不知其夋兔。方彼之時，窋詫之態，非闠闠之中所得見也。

今北方久熰，瀵氿甃眢，坌坲坲，燾天幠日。土地皴崩，罅可容人。南疆霶霈，洚水肆虐，當此之滈，茅舍盡走。欲苫不能，啼口立啾啾。

凡此異態，非天之咎。

君不見斵楩焚樟，岵之為屺，睇眄之下，萬山盡屼，百尺篔簹，化為竹著。於彼幼蛇，匌不盈寸，巴蛇王虺，盡化柈饈。玈氣烰烰，上格瑤池，貧地徠賈，以豐其貲。然千丈方圓，萊菔不生，九天之上，星河不見。

嗚呼！漫山設棙，遍地盡罘。此天災也？人禍也！河海黟然，濁水仍傾，此天災也？人禍也！斵木算刂竹，彍弮待獸，以至鹿不得走，翬不得飛，蟻不得宭，髬髵不見。此天災也？人禍也！

翕合沴氣，終日涽涽。天不復藍，水不復清。未有烏雲，天何暝暝？赤烏既出，焜耀無復。看天下，鳥飛不下，鮮見狉狉，當此之時，何處貣青天？

所幸者，人知之也，人更之也。然，上作網法，下偩幾何未可知也。

今天下多災。北國井冞，陣主復至，當與孔張俱歾。南域之霖，大禹洊存，只得扼腕而嘆息。人不咎己而咎旱魃，不誚己而諑共工。未之可也。闤闠所趨，不可恈恈。當思子孫後代，人己知之。然行之效，則體躆廟堂者思之，媕娿之徒，棄不婟嫪，國之大蠹，捐而必究。

吾所思者，河泮水墺，楊槐蓁蓁，町疃，柳榆其秝。苾葌柅柅游屮葳蕤，見柳而人不攦，視草而眾不蹸，日駕雙軑之車，斐斐閭巷之間，目不復睺，鼻不再鼽，鳥不驚人，鮒游沴然。

人者，天地孕育。今其反萬物，此獍也。今其不宜瞡瞡，遺禍搙孫，當修長遠之道以藾萬世。

今吾執筆於此，所思者，舍旁早蟠一株，今當唪唪，攲枝水上，當復駕舴艋，扌玄其落桃，投於苙。坐銀杏樹下，觀兒童嬉於樹下，延於磚祴，搤腕而惜水中未置菱藕幾株。燠熱之時，而可摘菱冣菂，爇之為饘，以奉親房。

呱呱墜地的小孩，只知道喝牛奶；到二十歲，還不知道牛的樣子。幼小的豬，（小孩）每天都吃它的肉；等到成年，也不能分辨豬的公母。人們常常啃吃野兔的兔腿，然而最終卻不知道狡兔有三窟。在那個時候，兔子從洞穴裡出來的神態，不是街市之中能夠看見的。

現今北方久旱，泉涸井枯，塵埃飄拂，遮天蔽日。土地乾裂，縫隙大可容人。南疆大雨滂沱，洪水肆虐。遇到這樣的水災，草舍都被沖走。想修繕而不能，人們只能啾啾地啼哭。

凡是這樣的異象，並非上天的罪過。

你難道看不見砍伐樹木焚燬森林，草木蔥鬱的山變得荒蕪。極目遠望，萬山都光禿禿的。百尺高的竹子，都做成了竹筷子。對於那些小蛇，粗不足一寸，（與）劇毒蛇王，都成為盤中美味。工廠黑色的廢氣蒸騰上升，上達瑤池。貧窮之地招徠商賈，以增加他們的財富。然而方圓千丈之內，連蘿蔔都不能生長，九天之上，星河也不能看見。

哎！人們漫山遍野地設下捕獸的機關和抓兔子的網。這是天災嗎？是人禍啊！河海裡的水已變得漆黑，各種廢水還在不斷向其中排放。這是天災嗎？是人禍啊！砍木伐竹，張弓等獸，以至鹿不能奔跑，鳥不能自由飛翔，螞蟻不能群居，野獸鬃毛豎起也不能看見。這是天災嗎？是人禍啊!

人們呼吸著濁氣，整天昏昏沉沉。天不再藍，水不再清澈。沒有烏雲，天空為何陰沉？旭日昇起，太陽光彩明亮的樣子也不復存在。看人間，鳥飛而不敢落下，很少能看見野獸成群奔跑，在這樣的時候，到哪裡去能乞求到青天？

慶幸的是人知道這種災難，人能夠改變這樣的狀況。然而，國家制定法令，民眾有幾個能遵守執行，就無法知道了。

現在天下多災多難。北國井枯，（即使）陳後主再次到來，（也只）當與姓孔與姓張的兩個妃子一齊死在井底；南疆大水，（即使）大禹還活著，（也）只能扼腕嘆息。人們不歸罪於自己而歸罪於造成旱災的鬼怪，不責備自己卻責備公共工程。不可這樣做啊！城市的發展不能急功近利，應當考慮到子孫後代。人們已經知道後果的嚴重性。然而力行改變，則是那些當權者要思考的。阿諛奉承的小人，捨棄而不要憐惜；國家的蛀蟲，捨棄而必定要追究。

我所夢想的是，河流邊上，楊槐青翠叢雜，舍邊空地上，柳樹榆樹稀疏而均勻地排列著。芳香的蘭花和野草長得十分茂盛。看見柳枝，但人們不去折斷它；看到草坪，但眾人不去踐踏。在街巷之間徘徊散步，眼睛不再迷茫，鼻子不再堵塞，鳥悠適而不怕人，鯽魚偶爾被水邊的動靜驚走。

人是天地所生。現在反而殘害萬物，這（如同）是生下來就吃母親的野獸。現在不應當目光短淺，遺禍子孫。應當作長遠之計來福蔭萬代。

今天我執筆於此，所想的是，屋旁長有早蟠桃一株，如今果實纍纍。桃樹的枝枒斜伸向水面，我想再駕小舟，拾起它落入水中的桃子，扔進豬圈。坐在銀杏樹下，觀看兒童在樹下嬉戲，在磚鋪的小道上閒適地散步。扼腕嘆惜水中沒有種植菱藕幾株。夏天炎熱的時候，就可以摘菱聚蓮，燒煮成粘稠的粥，侍奉親長。

[gato]

From google translate.

http://translate.google.com/#

Green Living

Birth, child, just know that drinking milk; to 2 years old, do not know like cattle. Young pigs, (child) eat its meat every day; until adulthood, it can not distinguish between male and female pigs. People often eat the rabbits eating the rabbit legs, but in the end do not know Jiaotu three caves. At that time, the rabbit comes out from the cave air of not being able to see the market.

Today the North long drought, springs dry up the well is dry, dust Fimbristylis crowded in upon. Dry land, could tolerating gaps. South downpour, floods. When it floods, cottage have been washed away. To repair and can not, one can only tweeted crying.

Where such a vision, not God's sins.

Do not see the felling of trees burned forests, lush vegetation, mountains become barren. Ji Mu Yuan Wang, mountains are bare. Hundred feet high bamboo chopsticks are made of bamboo. For those snake, less than one inch thick, (and) highly toxic loafers are a delicious plate. Plant transpiration increased emissions of black, on up to the Jade Pool. Poverty to attract merchants to increase their wealth. However, within a radius of little knowledge, even the radish can grow over nine days, Galaxy can not see.

Hey! People all over the mountain to set the authorities and arrested rabbit trappers web. This is a natural disaster it? Is man-made ah! River water, the sea has become dark, to which all wastewater still continuously discharged. This is a natural disaster it? Is man-made ah! Cutting wood cutting bamboo bow and other animals, and even deer can not run, birds are not free to fly, ants can not live in groups, animals can not see the erect mane. This is a natural disaster it? Is man-made ah!

Aggregate of people breathing all day groggy. Days no longer blue, water is no longer clear. No clouds, the sky overcast Why? The sun rose, the sun has disappeared like a bright luster. Look human, tend to fly and not fall, few can see flocks of wild animals running at such a time, where to go begging to the sky can be?

Fortunately, people know about this disaster, one can change this situation. However, the state pass laws to comply with the implementation of a number of people, they can not know.

Now the troubled world. The North well is dry, (even) Chen Houzhu come again, (only) when the hole with the last name together with Zhang's death at the bottom of the two concubine; southern flood, (even) Yu is still alive, (also ) only sighed with regret. People do not blame themselves and blame the drought caused by the ghosts, do not blame themselves but blame the public works. Ah can not do! Urban development can not be profit-oriented, should take into account future generations. People already know the seriousness of the consequences. But to practice change is that those in power need to think about. Adulation of the villain, rather than abandon pity; countries moth, abandoned and must be investigated.

My dream is that rivers edge, Yang Huai motley green, open space on residential side, willow elm sparse and uniform rows. Fragrant orchids and lush-looking weeds. See the willow, but people do not break it; see green, but the crowds do not trample. Wandering in the street walking between, the eyes are no longer confused, the nose is no longer blocked, and not about being a bird Yau fitness, the movements of the fish occasionally surprise waterside walk.

Man born of heaven and earth. Now instead of ruining everything, that (as) is born to eat the beasts of the mother. Now should not be short-sighted, leaving disaster descendants. Should be long-term solution to blessings from generation to generation.

Today I write this, the thinking is that there is early peach a long hut, now bore rich fruit. Peach tree branches inclined toward the surface, I would like to drive boat, picked it up and fell into the water, peaches, thrown into the pigpen. Ginkgo tree sitting, watching children playing under a tree, a small shop in brick lane leisurely walk. Becoming a member of the water does not regret the lotus plant Scattered Link. When the summer heat, they can gather Abstract Ling Lin, cooked into a thick porridge, serve a parent.

[cd6883]

作者是从秦始皇陵挖出来的。

呱呱小儿，但饮牛湩[dòng]，至於弱冠，不明犍[jiān]状。佌佌[cǐ]之豚，日食其羓[bā]。洎[jì]其成立，未识豜豭[jiānjiā]。每啮毚臑[niè chán nào]，然竟不知其夋[qūn]兔。方彼之时，窋[zhú]诧之态，非闠闠[huán huì]之中所得见也。

今北方久熰[ōu]，瀵氿甃眢[fèn guǐ zhòu yuān]，坌[bèn]坲坲[fó]，焘[dào]天幠[hū]日。土地皴[cūn]崩，罅[xià]可容人。南疆霶霈[pāng pèi]，洚水肆虐，当此之滈，茅舍尽走。欲苫（shàn）不能，啼口立啾啾[jiū]。

凡此异态，非天之咎。

君不见斵[zhuó]楩[pián]焚樟，岵[hù]之为屺[qǐ]，睇眄[miàn]之下，万山尽屼[wù]，百尺篔[yún]簹，化为竹著。於彼幼蛇，匌[gé]不盈寸，巴蛇王虺[huǐ]，尽化柈[pán]馐。玈[lu]气烰烰，上格瑶池，贫地徕贾，以丰其赀[zī]。然千丈方圆，莱菔不生，九天之上，星河不见。

呜呼！漫山设棙，遍地尽罘。此天灾也？人祸也！河海黟[yī]然，浊水仍倾，此天灾也？人祸也！斵木算刂竹，彍[guō]弮[juàn]待兽，以至鹿不得走，翬不得飞，蚁不得宭[qún]，髬髵不见。此天灾也？人祸也！

翕合沴[lì]气，终日涽涽。天不复蓝，水不复清。未有乌云，天何暝暝？赤乌既出，焜耀无复。看天下，鸟飞不下，鲜见狉狉，当此之时，何处貣青天？

所幸者，人知之也，人更之也。然，上作网法，下偩几何未可知也。

今天下多灾。北国井冞[shēn]，阵主复至，当与孔张俱歾[mò]。南域之霖，大禹洊存，只得扼腕而叹息。人不咎己而咎旱魃，不诮[qiào]己而诼共工。未之可也。闤闠所趋，不可恈恈。当思子孙后代，人己知之。然行之效，则体躆庙堂者思之，媕娿[ānē]之徒，弃不婟[hù]嫪，国之大蠹，捐而必究。

吾所思者，河泮水墺，杨槐蓁蓁[zhēn]，町疃[tuǎn]，柳榆其秝[lì]。苾葌柅柅游屮[chè]葳蕤，见柳而人不攦，视草而众不蹸，日驾双軑[dài]之车，斐斐闾巷之间，目不复睺，鼻不再鼽[qiú]，鸟不惊人，鲋[fù]游沴然 。

人者，天地孕育。今其反万物，此獍也。今其不宜瞡瞡[guī]，遗祸搙孙，当修长远之道以藾万世。

今吾执笔於此，所思者，舍旁早蟠一株，今当唪唪，攲枝水上，当复驾舴艋，扌玄其落桃，投於苙。坐银杏树下，观儿童嬉於树下，延於砖祴[gāi]，搤[è]腕而惜水中未置菱藕几株。燠[yù]热之时，而可摘菱冣[zuì]菂，爇之为饘[zhān]，以奉亲房。

[CrisPal]

去年什么地方有个考生居然用甲骨文写了篇作文。搞得考官们很纠结。看不明白也不好意思给零分。也不知道结果怎么样。

前阵子东北出了个研究古文字的三轮车夫,最后被特招进复旦了。高人在民间呐.

[xiaocai]

前阵子东北出了个研究古文字的三轮车夫,最后被特招进复旦了。高人在民间呐.

突然想起"肉食者鄙"这个说法……

[aristotle1990]

去年什么地方有个考生居然用甲骨文写了篇作文。搞得考官们很纠结。看不明白也不好意思给零分。也不知道结果怎么样。

这个我也听说过，好像他最后没被录取，总分不高吧。。。

刚才搜了一下，找到了这个：http://news.163.com/09/0624/09/5CIH8CMM00011229.html

[gato]

这作文考试啊，是想测什么呢？为什么要用像“绿色生活”、“我有双无形的翅膀”、“北京的符号”、“我想跟你握手”那么空虚、没内容的题目来决定大学入学的资格？

《新世纪周刊》（改名的《财经》杂志）的主编最近也提到过一个类似的问题：

http://blog.caing.com/article/821/

每个受过高中以上教育的人都能写好情信、家书和博客，但能够围绕事实清楚明白有条理地写新闻报道的人却少得多。写好这种文章需要才能但不是天才。它可以通过训练获得，并不容易但努力会有收获。不像写小说，努力不可或缺，但无法战胜天份。

我久有同感。国内写作教学的重点是抒情（“作秀”？），分析、梳理思维却不重视，高考作文里议论题也很少。很多重点大学毕业生都不善于写分析文章。我在其他帖子里也说过，这问题跟政治和文化传统都有关。

[xiaocai]

很多重点大学毕业生都不善于写分析文章。

很多理科生的毕业论文就是佐证。

[eatfastnoodle]

这肯定是特别做过准备得，明朝状元怕也不知道这么多得生僻字词。没有功劳也有苦劳，就凭这份心和功夫，进个本来就不被重视得文科系也不算过分吧。