鉴于

[Sinealba]

大家好！

下面句子：

In view of your long experience in wine tasting, we would be honored to count you among the 30 head judges in this competition.

不知道翻译的合不合适：

鉴于您对葡萄酒品鉴的丰富经验，我们十分荣幸地邀请您当本次竞赛30名“桌长”的一位。

也许有更正式的说法，请教大家，帮帮忙啊 ！ 谢谢！

[CrisPal]

Try this "出于对您在葡萄酒品鉴方面的丰富经验的尊重，......".

如果要用"鉴于",似要这么说，"鉴于您在葡萄酒品鉴方面有着丰富的经验...."

[Sinealba]

Thank you Crispal!

[Kenny同志]

“In view of”不必译出。

You don’t have to include “鉴于”in the Chinese translation.

试译：

I think I would translate it as:

您在葡萄酒品鉴方面经验丰富，……，我们将不胜荣幸。

“鉴于”的意思已经暗示出来了。

The meaning of the phrase “in view of” is implied in the target language.

[Sinealba]

Most Chinese colleagues reacted likewise when reading this wordy sentence!! Thanks a lot.

[JessieJessie]

当is a casual expression and here is not so appropriate as "担任"；head judge should be "首席评审员"or "首席鉴赏家"