aoliwei Posted November 4, 2010 at 08:36 AM Report Share Posted November 4, 2010 at 08:36 AM I had to write this short conversation as a homework piece, and I'm wondering if someone could check it over and pick up on any major problems? Ignore the pinyin, I'm mostly concerned about the characters being correct. Thanks so muchhhh Ni hao 你好 Ni hao 你好 Ni zenmeyang? Hao ma? 你怎么样？好吗？ Ting hao de, ni ne? 挺好的，你呢？ Ye, hen hao 也很好 Ni zai zher zuo shen me? 你在这儿做什么？ Wo mai dongxi ni ne? 我买东西，你呢？ Wo gen wo de nan pengyou yi qi qu fan dian chi wan fan 我跟我的男朋友一起去饭店吃晚饭 Ni de nan pengyou? Shi shei? 你的男朋友？是谁？ Ni ren shi xiao zhang ma? 你认识小张吗？ Wo men de tongxue xiao zhang ba? 我们的同学小张巴？ Dui… wo de nan pengyou shi ta de ge ge! 队， 我的男朋友是她的哥哥！ Ta de ge ge? Wo bu ren shi ta! 她的哥哥？我不认识他！ Ta shi er shi sui, da xue sheng. 他是二十岁，大学生。 Ta jiao shen me mingzi? 他叫什么名字？ Ta jiao Make 他叫马克。 Ta shi shenme … zi 他是什么样子 Ta hen shuai! Gaogao de, shoushou de 他很帅！高高的，瘦瘦的。 Hen hao. Ta xiang zuo shen me? 很好，他想做什么？ Ta shi yi ge feichanghaode xue sheng, chang chang zai jia li xue xi. Danshi Hen xi huan zuo zhong guo cai hhe riben cai… ni zhi dao ta shi riben ren? 他是一个非常好的学生，常常在家里学习。,很喜欢做中国菜和日本菜。。。 你知道他是日本人？ Zhidao… ta da…… ma? 知道，他打运动吗 Qunian tad a le da xue…. Dan… zaitataimangle. 去年他打了大学足球队，但现在他太忙了 Hao. Taxihuan shenme …. Shenme? 好他喜欢什么穿什么？ Nimenshenmeshihourenshide? 你们什么时候认识的？ Jinnian, Zai …. Dagai, san ge yue … 今年，在假期. 大概，三个月前 Zai nar ren shi de? 在哪儿认识的？ Zai Xiao Zhang de jia. Ta … women jieshao。 在小张的家。她把我们介绍。 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
semantic nuance Posted November 4, 2010 at 09:14 AM Report Share Posted November 4, 2010 at 09:14 AM 我们的同学小张巴？ 我們的同學小張嗎? 他是二十岁，大学生。 他二十歲，是個大學生。(Or, 在唸大學) 他是什么样子 他長什麼樣子? 他想做什么？......他是一个非常好的学生，常常在家里学习。,] These two dialogues seem not coherent. You asked 'What does he want to be /do?' Then you answered: He's a very good student, study a lot at home. What were you trying to say? Maybe I missed your point. 知道，他打运动吗 他常運動嗎 ?Or, 他喜歡做什麼運動? 好他喜欢什么穿什么？ What did you mean? Did you mean to say 'What does he like to wear?' or 'What does he like?' and 'What does he wear' respectively? If it is the first, then the sentence should be 他喜歡穿什麼樣的衣服? 她把我们介绍。 她介紹我們兩個認識。 Hope it helps! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
skylee Posted November 4, 2010 at 09:25 AM Report Share Posted November 4, 2010 at 09:25 AM 小张's brother is Japanese? :unsure: Dui… wo de nan pengyou shi ta de ge ge!队， 我的男朋友是她的哥哥！ Not 队, should be 对. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
daofeishi Posted November 8, 2010 at 07:36 AM Report Share Posted November 8, 2010 at 07:36 AM 他打运动吗 I have never heard anyone talk about 打-ing 运动. 打 is used for specific sports like 乒乓球/篮球/羽毛球 and is used in the collocation 打球. However, not every sport is 打-ed. Football, for example, is 踢-ed. You should rather ask “他做运动吗？” 去年他打了大学足球队 Football is 踢-ed. Also, you can't talk about 打ing or 踢ing a team. Rather, you talk about being on a team, or being the 队员/球员/成员 of a team: 他去年在大学足球队踢球。/他去年是大学足球队的队员。 好他喜欢什么穿什么？ I don't think I get this one. Are you asking what kind of clothes he wears, as in 他喜欢穿什么衣服? 她把我们介绍 Here you want to say that someone introduced you to each other. This should be expressed as 是小张介绍我们认识的。 Edit: Never mind, I scrolled through the post too quickly. Semantic Nuance has already covered all of it (except in 繁体字. Perhaps someone benefits from getting it in 简体字 instead :rolleyes: ). 小张's brother is Japanese? 小张 could be Japanese? Or we could be talking about a half brother? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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