New Members froggie Posted April 2, 2011 at 07:05 PM New Members Report Posted April 2, 2011 at 07:05 PM Can someone review this paragraph please? This is for my Chinese 101 class. The assignment is to write about how we felt before spring break and what we want to do for spring break, what we actually did during spring break, and how we felt after spring break. I am unsure if I'm using past and future tense correctly. It is simplified Mandarin. I would greatly appreciate any help, I was up to 4am doing this :-( 以前春假我很忙，很累。我除了学校以外还去工作。我有多 工作和学校。我想晚才起床。 这个春假我是每天都睡得很晚。我看的”Limitless”电影。它 是很好。我联系写汉字。 以后春假我觉得很好。我应该做的功课。现在我要做的攻 克。 Thanks! Quote
jbradfor Posted April 4, 2011 at 05:44 PM Report Posted April 4, 2011 at 05:44 PM A couple of items; I think there are more, but these are the ones that stood out to me. 以前春假 -- I assume you're trying to say "before spring break"? I believe the order is wrong, it should be 春假前. 学校 -- I believe this is only a noun meaning "school, campus", as in the physical place, and can not be used as a replacement for "class" or "to do school work" 它 是很好 -> 是很好看 ? Quote
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