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说话的伤口 - song translation - help needed


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Today I decided to try to translate a Chinese song I like. Please note that my Chinese is nowhere near a level high enough to be translating any sort of native text. I'm just trying to have some fun studying. You are hereby granted to laugh at my feeble attempt.

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歌名:说话的伤口

乐队:pk14

这是说话的伤口 - this is the talk of wounds

这是说话的伤口 - this is the talk of wounds

它穿过血红的天空 - it passes through blood red skies

唱着一支熟悉的歌 - singing a familier song

这是我的手 - this is my hand

这是我的手 - this is my hand

它抓住黑夜并且把它扔掉 - it grabs the nights and throws them away

在夏天的公路上奔跑 - in summers of running on public roads

在血液流出的瞬间 - in moments of blood flowing out

摆出胜利的姿态并且大声地喊叫 - takes on a victorious posture and cries out loud

这些说话的伤口 - these talks of wounds

这些说话的伤口 - these talks of wounds

它们穿过巨大的轰鸣 - they pass through immense rumble

毫不理会我的沉默 - hardly understanding my silence

在轰炸开始的时候 - when de bombing began

跑到外面发现时间已经过了很久 - ran outside to find a lot of time had already passed

在所有的街道的尽头 - at the very end of the street

都有哭泣的影子以及大声地喊叫 - all cry in the shadow and scream out loud

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Seems a bit dramatic to me, but that might be due to my translation. If anyone would care to make a proper translation of this song, and/or give any pointers, it would be highly appreciated.

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