my first translation

[chanming]

I have a notebook, a pen and an eraser.

我 有 笔 记 本， 笔 ，和 橡 皮 。

wo you bi ji ben bi he xiang pi

[Shelley]

Some more details would be nice, ie: how long have you been studying, what would you like from this forum concerning this post?

Do you want it marked out of 10? Or just some praise so you can go and do some more feeling good:)

I don't want to sound mean, but it seems a bit odd, just posting that.

[chanming]

I was just testing. It is my first post. I am sorry. From now on I will be asking questions with much needed answers. Or I will print my translations if I need corrections.

[Shelley]

No need to apologise, i was just curious. It makes sense now. You don't have to only ask questions or such.

Just give enough info to avoid confusion:)

Good luck and well done:)

[jkhsu]

If you are looking for the exact translation of "I have a notebook, a pen and an eraser," then you are missing the measure words.

It should be:

我有一本笔记本，一支笔 ，和一块橡皮。

[大肚男]

by the way you might also be interested in a website like lang-8.com

there, you could post sentences and natives would correct it

[shinewind]

Agree with #5. Specify the quantities. BTW, it seems that whatever language you are leaning there will always be a lesson on "classroom findings". I vivdly recall when I was having this lesson we were asked to do Q & A in pairs.

"What do you have" "I have..."

"Do you/Does he have...?" "Yes/No...."