Please can someone help me out?

[Guest carl_traill]

Hi everyone I'm new here

A girl I know in China wants to know if I fancy moveing over there some time but I want to answer her in Chinese but I don't know that much I've just started to learn.

I just want to say

I would love to move over to China it would be a dream come true for me but it's to soon for me.

I would like to go over there for a holliday first and if I like it I might emegrate there when I'm 25.

[Guest Anonymous]

I would love to move over to China it would be a dream come true for me but it's to soon for me.

Wo hen xiang ban dao Zhongguo, zhe dui wo lai shuo hui shi yi ge mei meng cheng zhen, danshi xianzai dui wo lai shuo haishi tai zao le.

I would like to go over there for a holliday first and if I like it I might emegrate there when I'm 25.

Wo xiang xian qu nali dujia, ruguo wo xihuan de hua wo keneng hui ershiwu (25) sui shi yimin dao nali.

[pazu]

Hi Kulong,

I think "zhe dui wo lai shuo" "yi ge mei meng cheng zhen" sounds much like European Chinese, I think the following is better.

"Wo hen xiang ban dao Zhongguo qu, zhe shi wo de yuanwang, dan xianzai hai bushi shihou. (我很想搬到中國去, 這是我的願望, 但現在還不是時候。)

"wo xiang zai jiaqi de shihou xian qu nali kankan, ruguo xihuan de hua, wo keneng ershiwu sui yihou jiu qu Zhongguo zhu." (我想在假期的時候先去那裡看看, 如果喜歡的話, 我可能二十五歲以後就去中國住。)

[Guest Anonymous]

I think "zhe dui wo lai shuo" "yi ge mei meng cheng zhen" sounds much like European Chinese, I think the following is better.

You're right and thanks for the correction.

[Guest carl_traill]

Thank you kulong and pazu.