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I haven't taken Chinese for almost a year, but I'm applying to apply to study abroad in China so I can get all of my credit. Part of the application is an essay, and since it's been so long, I'm worried it might have some elementary mistakes that don't reflect where my knowledge was at it's peak. I picked out a few sentences that I'm worried may be faulty:

我很高兴不过一度搬家, 因为做新朋友得不太常常. I'm very glad we only moved once because I didn't have to make new friends too often.

聊天得容易. -chat very easily. Is that the right 'de'?

他对他的同学不喜欢. He towards his classmates did not like (them). He didn't like his classmates

我认为很多中国人会说英文,但是我期望他们说中文对我. I feel like many Chinese people can speak English, but I wish for them to speak Chinese to me.

我跟三个朋友一同会住在一个公寓. I will live in an apartment with three friends. Is 一同 or 一起 better?

And finally, what's the best word to describe an essay? 文章?

Thanks for the help!

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#1我很高兴只搬过一次家,因为不必经常交新朋友

#2Chat very easily ,I don't know whether 聊天得很容易 is right , you may mean, easy to chat,很平易近人 is better if I'm right

#3他不喜欢他的同学

#4但我希望他们对我说中文, the word 期望 is not very well

#5一起 is better, in fact,一起 and 会 can be dropped,我和三个朋友住在一个公寓 is all right

#6文章 ,I think it's all right

And I think a big problem is the order of words, mate

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Bates is right and I will add something

Chat very easily 聊得很轻松 the “easily” means 轻松 example :“take it easy” “放轻松”

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Consider also 作文 for essay.

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What do you mean by "Chat very easily" within the context you are trying to present?

很健谈 (describing someone that is very easy to chat with)

可以很容已的与人交谈 (can easily chat with a person)

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That should be *可以很容易地与人交谈.

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