An attempt on "How was your day?" paragraph.

[brandonwee]

今天，我醒在下午。我睡十小时，平时做没有东西整天因为我没有类。但我有一个考试下周。不能玩电游因为笔记本电脑在修复。

I woke up in the afternoon today. Slept for 10 hours, I've been doing nothing lately because I no longer have classes. I still have an exam next week however. I can't play video games right now because my laptop is being repaired.

I would be grateful for any tips and suggestions.

[ABCsOfChinese]

我今天下午才醒來，睡覺睡了十個小時。最近我甚麼都沒有做因為不用上課，可是我下個禮拜仍然需要考試。我都不能玩電腦因為我在修理我的筆記電腦。

[flora4744]

I woke up in the afternoon today should be translation 我今天下午才睡醒。Time is the sentence attributive，So you can such translation我睡醒在今天下午，The expression, grammar is right，butMore idiomatic expressions are我今天下午才睡醒。

woke up in the afternoon today.（我今天下午才睡醒） Slept for 10 hours, （睡了10个小时）I've been doing nothing lately because I no longer have classes.（我最近什么都没有做因为不用上课） I still have an exam next week however.（但是我下个星期还有一个考试） I can't play video games right now because my laptop is being repaired.（我现在不能玩电脑因为我的笔记本电脑拿去修了）

[zswd89]

I woke up in the afternoon today.

我今天下午（才）醒来。

Slept for 10 hours, I've been doing nothing lately because I no longer have classes.

睡了10个小时，因为我没有课，所以最近什么都没做。

I still have an exam next week however.

但是我下周仍然要（参加）考试。

I can't play video games right now because my laptop is being repaired.

因为我笔记本电脑正在（被）修理，所以我目前不能玩计算机游戏。

[lingo-ling]

我今天下午睡醒。 "Today I woke up in the afternoon."

我今天下午才睡醒。 "Today I didn't wake up until the afternoon."

才 "only then", "not until", "before"