Help with a mandarin email

[ponchoritchie]

I'm traveling to China in October and I am trying to book a taxi journey via email. I have been reccomended a particular taxi firm but they only speak Mandarin. I have drafted the following email but I was wondering if anyone would be willing to check it for me before I send it.

I have completed a begginners Mandarin course but my knowledge is sketchy at best :S

尊敬的裴哥

我想订张行程｡ 请详见下文｡

旅游日期: 2013年10月16号 星期三

出发点: 花园大饭店 - 大同,永泰街59号

第一站: 悬空寺

第二站: 佛宫寺释迦塔

终点: 五台山仰华山庄 - 五台山风景区台怀镇( 近五爷庙) (忻州, 035515)

多少钱？

我是老外｡ 对不起 我的中文不太好｡

谢谢

Ritchie

Thanks in advance

[fanglu]

The email gets the message across. Before asking how much, I would ask if they are available.

Having said that, there are a lot of taxis in Datong. I wouldn't bother pre-booking, unless you have some specific requirement.

[szcube]

The email is just fine.But why not call a cab instead of pre-booking.Because you want to visit several places ,I suggest that you just call the cab then.