New Members WeiTing Posted January 24, 2015 at 05:50 AM New Members Report Posted January 24, 2015 at 05:50 AM Hello! I was tasked with writing a poem in Chinese for class. I translated a poem I wrote myself and was hoping to bet some helpful reviews/ revision. I open to any suggestions and just want to make sure it makes sense and is grammatically correct. Here it is: 明亮的星星飞越天空 "Bright stars fly across the sky" 与银河系水 "With the water of the Milky Way" 我还没有看到东西如此美, "I have never seen anything so beautiful," 除了你的微笑。 "Apart from your smile." I wrote the original english poem that I wrote under each line. Thank you so much for your help! 谢谢你！ Quote
Hofmann Posted January 25, 2015 at 05:38 PM Report Posted January 25, 2015 at 05:38 PM I believe your task was to write a poem in Chinese first instead of translate. Why not do so? Quote
Guest123 Posted January 25, 2015 at 08:03 PM Report Posted January 25, 2015 at 08:03 PM That's right, in this translation the text remains very english. And it sound like simple text, even if it's quite romantic, not like a chinese style poem... Quote
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