- my voice

[lamhien]

I love to learn Chinese and I learn myself through many Chinese songs. This is my voice ... hjhjhj That's my way to learn Chinese language 

 

芙蓉雨 [Furong yu] at: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=p1NZgXVgdb8

 

Lyrics:

 

藕花香 染檐牙

惹那诗人纵步随她

佩声微 琴声儿退

斗胆了一池眉叶丹砂

 

画船开 心随他

谁不作美偏起风沙

倚蓬窗 月色轻晃

偶闻得渔翁一席话

 

（试问） 多一份情又怎地

站在别人的雨季

淋湿自己空弹一出戏

空望他 功成名就又怎地

豆腐换成金羽衣 

岂不知你已在画里

 

这一搭 莲蓬子落地 几回迷

[ouyangnufang]

水平真不错，竟然能欣赏这类古文。

[Shelley]

Very slick video for someone who is just learning Chinese through singing.

[Demonic_Duck]

水平真不错，竟然能欣赏这类古文。

 

歌词里没有什么古文

 

Agree with Shelley, video is very nicely made (assuming it's all your own work).

 

Pronunciation comments:

• Your [r] sound in “染” is very slightly rolled, should be no rolling.
• Some of your [z], [zh] and [ch] sounds are too soft, i.e. not enough of a definite plosive sound at the beginning.
• Last line “几回迷” sounded like [xi kui mi] instead of [ji hui mi]. A few other places seem to have the same problem with [j] or [q] sounding like [x].

[imorochimaru]

What language is this song? It sounds kinda like Mandarin but not exactly... Hmm...

[lamhien]

 

Pronunciation comments:

• Your [r] sound in “染” is very slightly rolled, should be no rolling.
• Some of your [z], [zh] and [ch] sounds are too soft, i.e. not enough of a definite plosive sound at the beginning.
• Last line “几回迷” sounded like [xi kui mi] instead of [ji hui mi]. A few other places seem to have the same problem with [j] or [q] sounding like [x].

 

Thank so much for your contribution

[Leihuangdi]

I agree with what Demonic_Duck said about pronunciation but I also want to mention breathing. Here's where I hear you breathed:

 

惹那诗人纵步随她 (0‘46)

偶闻得 渔翁'一席话 (1'27, 2'44) 

岂不知你已在'画里 (3'12)

and last verse 几回'迷

 

I think given the meaning and punctuation of the lyrics they shouldn't be obvious gaps here? Otherwise the lyrics sound out of breath.