My presentation

[omouc22]

Hi all, I've just subscribed here. I've made my presentation in chinese, can you check out it please?

 

你们好，我来介绍一下。我叫Salvatore，我是意大利人。我十九岁。我住那不勒斯。我是"东方"大学一班汉语的学生。

我家有四口人，我爸爸，妈妈，哥哥和我。我爸爸五十八岁。他是太夫，他在医院工作。我妈妈是五十岁。她是老师，她在学校工作。

我哥哥二十七岁。他和我都是学生。

 

 

[lips]

You're a first-year student in Chinese? That's very good.

住那不勒斯：住在那不勒斯 is better.

一班汉语：Don't know what you mean by that. Maybe 一级？一班 usually means "a group of".

太夫：should be ＂大夫＂。

我妈妈是五十岁：是 can be left out.

Some punctuation errors, but that's beyond first-year.

All in all, quite well written.

[omouc22]

Thank you for replying

With "一班汉语" I meant I'm in the firstyear class of Chinese

All the other mistakes were made by distraction, I was in hurry when I wrote the post

 

Thank you that made me feel better, I've my first exam in 2 weeks

Finger crossed