omouc22 Posted April 22, 2018 at 03:07 PM Report Posted April 22, 2018 at 03:07 PM Can you check for any grammar mistakes? Thank you very much! 桂林菜像湖南和粤的似的差不多。 很多桂林的菜有油辣和苦口味。桂林的名吃是: - 阳朔啤酒鱼：鱼在啤酒里煮了 - 米粉 ： 桂林最名的小吃。还有，米粉很一道便宜的菜(一碗，三块五) - 油茶 ：这是一个非常有名桂林的茶。桂林人早饭的时候喜欢喝这种茶。 - 白果炖老鸭 ：这是一道桂林的名家常菜。白果是一个中草药。还有，白果跟鸭一起煮为了做这个名汤。 Quote
889 Posted April 22, 2018 at 03:56 PM Report Posted April 22, 2018 at 03:56 PM Wouldn't it be better to turn in your work as you wrote it? That'd tell the teacher the areas you and probably the other students need to review, again and maybe again. Hand in a perfect paper and the teacher's getting no feedback -- no accurate feedback -- on the effectiveness of the teaching. No feedback except that you probably had help. 1 Quote
omouc22 Posted April 23, 2018 at 05:45 AM Author Report Posted April 23, 2018 at 05:45 AM Yeah you're right, but it's supposed to be already well written for tomorrow! Quote
Beelzebro Posted April 23, 2018 at 08:24 AM Report Posted April 23, 2018 at 08:24 AM In terms of grammar, there are a few changes I would recommend: - remove 似的 - change 名吃 to 名菜 - change 鱼在啤酒里煮了 to 用啤酒煮的鱼 - change 最名 to 最有名 - change 还有，米粉很一道便宜的菜 to 还有，米粉是一道很便宜的菜 to make it grammatically correct. However, simply saying 而且很便宜 would be better in my opinion. I also suspect that the word 菜 can't or at least shouldn't be applied to a dish of plain noodles or rice, but I'm not sure. Perhaps someone else can confirm. - this part 还有，白果跟鸭一起煮为了做这个名汤 also needs some attention but I'm not 100% sure what you want to say. Is it "also, baiguo is cooked with duck to make this famous soup"? 1 1 Quote
omouc22 Posted April 23, 2018 at 03:09 PM Author Report Posted April 23, 2018 at 03:09 PM Thank you! About the last sentence, yes that's what I mean Quote
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