Hi! My first post! Question...

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Hi there! Idk if there is a specific translation section on this forum, and if so please let me know where it is! thank you!!!

 

I have written a response to a text message from the principal of a Chinese academy where I used to take classes, and I tried my very best to write my response in Chinese correctly but I would be SO grateful if someone could tell me the mistakes I've made.

 

Here's the teacher's message: xx，你好! 最近怎么样？好久没联系了，我最近也太忙了。听说你换了工作，新的工作怎么样？喜欢吗？

 

Here's my response: 王老师，您好！谢谢你的短信！好久没联系了，你的中文课怎么样？我相信教给孩子video conference的课 应该是挺难的！对！我换了工作，Sept xx 我开始了新的工作，我很喜欢！我在xx 医院工作。我学了很多新的skills, 比方说，抽血。。。哈哈一点儿可怕。对不起，我很多星期找工作了，所以应该省钱，没有钱上中文课。我工作过了一会儿就可以再上课！谢谢，老师！

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I wouldn't use 相信 there: it's too strong and more like belief in a credo. Try something softer like 觉得 instead.

 

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