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HI can u read this and thell me of any mistakes ? i think its all correct ?

also can u help me add a liitle bit to it about 40 more characters. thankyou

your help is much appriciated.

租房子

去年我从英国回中国。上星期我从广州到北京。我认识了 一个漂亮昀姑娘。 她的

眼睛是蓝色的。 她是我的女朋友。 这是好事,可是我 的公房间 太小, 她不能常

来我这儿。 我想找-间大点儿的房间。我也想租-间有卧室, 客厅和书房的房间,

房租贵一点儿没问题。 昨天我跟 我的朋友去租 房 公司 了。我们半个 小时 。

我钱换了。 我的好朋友给我的女朋友打了电话, 让她 来帮助我们。 我没有找

经理 。我们等了一 会儿。她 出来了。 她 找 到经理了, 就社她 爸爸, 他说不

好意思, 他没有好茶和完 了。 我们 离开了公司。 她们 看了一个电影 。 我们

没有看电影。

Posted

Your chinese is ok. But I'm not quite understand what you want to say. I've done some revision for you.

租房子

去年我从英国回中国。上星期我从广州到北京。我认识了 一个漂亮昀姑娘。 她的

眼睛是蓝色的。 她是我的女朋友。 这是好事,可是我 的公房间 太小, 她不能常

来我这儿。 我想找-间大点儿的房间。我也想租-间有卧室, 客厅和书房的房间,

房租贵一点儿没问题。 昨天我跟 我的朋友去租 房 公司 了。我们半个 小时 。

我钱换了。 我的好朋友给我的女朋友打了电话, 让她 来帮助我们。 我没有找

经理 。我们等了一 会儿。她 出来了。 她 找 到经理了, 就社她 爸爸, 他说不

好意思, 他没有好茶和完 了。 我们 离开了公司。 她们 看了一个电影 。 我们

没有看电影。

求租房子

去年我从英国回到了中国,上星期我从广州来到了北京。我认识了一个漂亮的蓝眼睛姑娘,她成了我的女朋友。不过由于我公司的房间太小,她不能常来我这儿。我想租一间大点儿的房间,有客厅和书房,房租贵一点没有关系。昨天,我跟朋友去找租房公司了。(我们花半个小时把钱换了?)我的好朋友给我的女朋友打了电话,让她来帮我们。我们没有找经理。过了一会儿,她来了,找到了经理——就是她爸爸。经理说不好意思,没有好茶招待,都喝完了。离开公司后,她们去看了一场电影,我们没有去。

  • 2 weeks later...
Posted

hey

i am using pratical chinese reader level 2 . mandarin is the best. so how long have u been learning chinese?

Posted

I've just started text book 2. I started learning Chinese properly last September (at uni, I'm a first year). I'm lucky because our teacher is fantastic. :) I love the New Practical Chinese Reader. Textbook 1 was incredibly user friendly, we're just on lesson 16 now (book 2).

I'd recommend these books to anyone.

You're right, Mandarin is such a beautiful language. I'm loving my course. What's your course like?

  • 6 months later...
Posted

i'm in Sheffield and I've been looking around for a teacher. I'm using Practical chinese reader at the mo - how's it going for you? I've been doing chinese for 11months now.

would you do me a favour and ask your teachers if they know of any places or people in Rotherham or Sheffield that teach chinese?

By the way, good text jamesGoff ^_^

Posted
would you do me a favour and ask your teachers if they know of any places or people in Rotherham or Sheffield that teach chinese?
The SEAS at the University of Sheffield teaches Chinese, Japanese and Korean (and others).

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