i tried translating... can someone C&C?

[Strawberries513]

I am a beginner at chinese and i wanted to try to translate this paragraph i found online: (just for practice)

任何一门语言，都有“听、说、读、写”四大关。对于我们有家庭中文背景的孩子而言，“写”是学习中文的最大难关。中国字的难写难记，是他们抗拒学习中文的主要原因。如何辅导孩子正确地写字，让孩子始终保持着学习中文的兴趣，是老师和家长的共同任务。

and well, here is what i got. (i warn you, its bad!!)

whatever language, all have "listening, speaking, reading, and writing" the four big components. regarding the chinese background of our children, chinese writing is the hardest aspect. the characters that are hard to write and hard to remember, is the main reason they defy learning chinese. whatever teaches them to correctly write characters and allows them to have intrest in chinese from beginning to end, is the teacher's and parent's mission.

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can someone please check and correct this? (and be BRUTAL!!)

thanks sooo much

[you101]

hi! i'm in the process of relearning chinese, studuied chinese in elementary and high school before, and here's my take.

ur translataion has the right content but i think just some mistakes in the choice of words to make the english sound better.

here's my version.

any languange has four major components, listening, speaking, reading and writing. with regrads to us, children coming coming families with chinese background, writing is the hardest aspect in learning chinese. chinese words' difficulty to write and difficulty to remember is the major reason why we don't like learning chinese. Pushing children to be diligent in writing chinese characters and have children develop and sustain their interest in learning the chinese language is every teacher and parent 's shared responsibility.

[tanhql]

任何一门语言，都有“听、说、读、写”四大关。

in any language, there are four important components: listening, speaking, reading and writing.

对于我们有家庭中文背景的孩子而言，“写”是学习中文的最大难关。

to our children who have chinese family background, "writing" is the major difficulty.

中国字的难写难记，是他们抗拒学习中文的主要原因。

the main reason they resist/refuse to learn chinese, is that the characters are difficult to memorise and write.

如何辅导孩子正确地写字，让孩子始终保持着学习中文的兴趣，是老师和家长的共同任务。

it's the responsibility of the parents and teachers to figure out how to teach the children to write the characters properly, and to ensure that the children remain interested in learning chinese.